Coloring Book Page #4 : PHOENIX

So, my first attempt today at the coloring book page for kids was weak compared to what I had envisioned. I am posting it here anyway. Below it though, is the preferred page, finished, and with a fat baby Phoenix which is way cuter. SO, again, first image is the "no good but still sharing it because it has some merit of its own", below it is the "real" image that I encourage those with kids to print out to color and test it on their little ones. Let me know what they think!